The story of Damned is a continuation of New Moon where Edward leaves Bella. This actally happened to a close friend of mine, at least the very begining happened. Of course, she died and stayed dead. So, no, I did not just pull the first part (the main idea) out of my head, nor did I steal it from somewhere. Though, I kind of wish that I did get it from somewhere else.  As of 9-11-09 As I feared, I did loose interest in the story. Though, my friends are still addicted to it and... well... they're purswasive. Luckily for my sanity, they're busy trying to get used to school again. Either way, Damned is on a hiatus before it even got on Fanfiction. Though, don't give up on me yet. There is still hope!
As of 6-4-09 As the story becomes longer and longer, I feel more comfortable that I am permanitally addicted to it. It is currently 45 pages long and is growing more and more each day. Even with finals coming up in school, I somehow manage to find time to write. I write fast, getting as much as possible down before i have to go to work again. This story will probably be uploaded onto Fanfiction soon, but it is not as of yet. You see, I will be leaving 3 different times during the summer for Youth Corps, which is basically boot camp where you get paid in the end. I really don't want to come back and have it turn out that i have lost interest in this story, and thus am still warry of uploading it. Also, i could really use a beta. My family are not big fans of my work, usually not giving a damn either way. So, they are not an option. Several of my friends have offered but I know that this will only add more to their work load, which is already too big in my opinion. Anyway, the subject of uploading is getting closer to a yes, but is not in the "right now" area yet.
As of 5-31-09 The future of this story is currently unknown. Yes, I have found myself addicted to this story right now, but I don't know about later on. Unfortunatoly, it is common for me to be addicted and unable to put down the pensile one day and have permanint writer's block the next. For that reason, i will not upload this story onto Fanfiction.net yet. Thought, if this were to be a story that had no hopes of being uploaded, i would not have put it on here so don't kill me yet! Curently this story is 43 pages long and has 11,201 words. I have lost count on how many chapters are in it and do not want to go through and count them all :P
The Damned is what they call themsleves. They are people who should have died, but didn't. Well, either that or they came back. They are cursed to live forever on the Earth, never aging. They can't kill themselves, they've tried several times. This is the story about Bella's group of Damned and how they've gone from one depressed 18-year-old to 7 Damned living as a normal family. This is a story about love and loss, and then gain. Bella wanted to die when she realized she wasn't aging. She didn't want to live forever without Edward. She didn't want to be alone! But, she found a friend, and then they found more. Slowly, they all recovered from their own tramatic deaths. None of them forget, and none of them said that they did. Though, together, they became a family. Life is a bitch, and it's only worse to those who are stuck in it for eternity.
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Characters are the same as Metior Shower, just with different histories. For anyone who hasnt read Metior Shower, here you go.
Name: Isabella Swan Nickname: Izzy or Bella Year of "Death": 2008 Physical Age: 18 Hair: Long Brown Eyes: Chocolate Ability: Mind, Intangability, and Telikonesis Death: Raped, beat, shot, chased through forrest, shot
Name: Natasha Cornelia Nickname: Tasha Year of Death: 2032 Phycial Age: 18 Hair: Light Brown Eyes: Hazel Ability: Pyrokinesis (fire) Death: Hotel fire/crushed under colapsed ceiling
Name: Brandon Sherman Nickname: Don Year of Death: 2053 Phycial Age: 19 Hair: Blond Eyes: Blue Ability: Copies Death: Earthquake, crushed under colapsed bridge
Name: Elizabeth Sherman Nickname: Liz Year of Death: 2053 Phycial Age: 19 Hair: Blond Eyes: Blue Ability: Teloportation Death: Earthquake, crushed under colapsed bridge
Name: Dylan Hawkins Nickname: DJ Year of Death: 2080 Phycial Age: 21 Hair: Black Eyes: Ability: Air Death:
Name: Mariah Tucker Nickname: Mar Year of Death: 2093 Phycial Age: 16 Hair: Dark Brown Eyes: Dark Brown Ability: Water Death: Drown during flash flood
Name: Virgil Hawkins Nickname: Year of Death: 2080 Phycial Age: 18 Hair: Black Eyes: Ability: Electricity Death:
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Isabella Swan (Bella) 
Important info: 1) She already knew about vampires and is close to Volturi, especally Aro. 2) She's the oldest and most experianced of the group 3) She tried to kill herself nomerous times before she met Natasha 4) Though she hides it, she is still very tramutized by the day of her death
Natasha Cornelia (Tasha) 
Important info: 1) She is extremely claustrophobic and used to be pyrophobic because of her death 2) She is dating/married to Brandon 3) She is the closeset to Bella because she was the first to join her 4) She's afraid of loosing loved ones, which is why she was panicking when Brandon went missing in 2053
Brandon Sherman (Don)  Important info: 1) He is the younger twin brother to Elizabeth yet he is the protective one 2) He loves music just like Liz yet loved tech and machinery more 3) He is dating/married to Natash 4) He had loved Natasha before he died but never said anything, fearing that she didn't feel the same way 5) He is the 2nd most protective boy in the group and is the closest to Bella
Elizabeth Sherman (Liz) 
Important Info: 1) She is the older tiwn sister to Brandon 2) She has been extremely afraid of the dark sense childhood 3) She is dating/married to Dylan 4) She constantly has nighmares about being surounded by darkness and no one being around. Those nightmares are from the first time she woke up after she died
Dylan Hawkins (DJ)  Important Info: 1) He is the older brother to Virgil 2) They were separated from their parents at a young age and grew up on the streets 3) He values family above everything else and is terrified of loosing it 4) He is the most protective and teritorial of the group, which is usually unnessisary
Mariah Tucker (Mar)  Important Info: 1) She is very quiet and reserved and usually doesn't trust other adults 2) She grew up in foster care, her last one being abusive 3) She never really had a real family or any friends so it took her a while to get used to being in this group 4) She is dating/engaged to Virgil 5) Because of her quiet nature, she quickly adopts the nickname Turtle
Virgil Hawkins  Important Info: 1) He is the main prankster of the family. 2) |
Their house/vehicles: The hosue  It has to be huge Bella's Room  Also known as no man's land ;)
Her motercycle  It's her baby
Natasha's room  Will soon be filled with books
Natasha's Car  Messing with it will lead to a firey death
Brandon's room  Often shared with Natasha
Brandon's Truck 
Elizabeth's room  It's never completely dark, that's for sure It's very orange Care to guess what her favorite color is?
Dylan's room  It is often shared with Elizabeth It is also the 2nd choice for when Samuel has a nighmare
Dylan's Car  For special occasions or when they just want to show off ;)
Mariah's Room  It's very pruple Care to guess what her favorite color is?
Virgil's room  Very open
Virgil's car  |
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